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August 31st, 2018, 5:53 am
@Spirit of Water: WOW, thank you very much for all your nice comments ! ^0^ YOU MADE MY DAAAY! <3 I'm so happy you liked the first chapter! :D (and I'm soooooo happy that the grammatical mistakes were just a few...! What a relief!!!)
I'm going to publish the next chapter in the next days...! I'm releasing this parts pretty fast because I already had drawn all the pages! But I also opened a Patreon account to allow fans to support my work (currently, I am finishing to draw the 3rd chapter).
If you want to help me (or you know someone who would want to support me) this is the link:

Thanks for everything and I'd love to hear again from you! ^0^
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Spirit of Water
August 30th, 2018, 11:34 pm
In the summary, you were concerned about grammatical mistakes, but I noticed very few. (I wish that my grammatical mistakes in my non-native language were as few!) The dialogue flowed well. As was commented by the first reviewer, they really are kids. I love it when kids in comics actually act like kids. :) I wonder if their parents will get suspicious when they're gone every day and all day, but we'll see.

Nice character/personality establishment, lovely art, nice flow: Overall, this is quite a lovely first chapter. It set the stage very well for the rest of the story. Beautiful colors, too. Very good job. :)